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Say To Me When
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Say To Me When |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SAY TO ME WHEN” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When the flowers bloom in spring, I would come to you then, my thoughts you would know of, yet I ask of you, say to me when… When the sun caresses you in summer, I would come to you then, my embrace would you know of, yet I ask of you, say to me when… When the leaves flow silent in autumn, I would come to you then, my kiss you would know of, yet I ask of you, say to me when…. When the snow drifts in winter, I would come to you then, my warmth you would know of, yet I ask of you, say to me when… I would come to you now, or perhaps come to you later, my touch you would then know of, and I will love you, today and ever after… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Spring is my favorite season of the year, but no matter what time of year it is never too late or awkward to speak of a love that is true! (big hugggsssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, "When is what we say when our cup is filled to overflowing." So I would never say to you when but rather come whenever. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, As Noah said, this is precious. So open and loving and willing.......to please, and be pleased. Enjoyed. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so beautiful...Just beautiful...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, Bill...the seasons are all made for love. You've shown that it is the lovers who make the final choice. Nice one, BC!! A truly happy person is one who |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A pretty picture here my friend. Nice write.ThisDiamond |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
How nice to hear a male express himself so openly. If this is written to someone special, I wish you the very best. Anyone who is able to verbalize their feelings so openly deserves the nicest things possible in life. Barb |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill... Very tender write. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a loving poem!!! I enjoyed it!!! Neeraja |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I think this one belongs on my "BCI favorites" list, m'friend... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, this is honestly one of the best, if not the best I have seen from you. Wonderful flow to his piece. Much enjoyed the read... ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Bill... I hope your when is now. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa! I like it! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I really do like this it is lovely. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
beautifull write Bill enjoyed reading it hugs, Kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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