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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-01-31 10:10 AM


That moment of peace finally arrived
when it formed in a thought joined
together
we shall take our time in becoming
complete within ourselves.
Together
held within an understanding
of caring, sharing
and love deep enough
to give us both
time       to heal.
Together,
finding our own ways
until our hearts are sure,
and love touches us
tenderly
once more.



I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-31-2003 10:10 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-01-31 10:25 AM


"...becoming complete within ourselves. Together.."

Donna, those words speak volumes. Sounds like things are improving in the love department!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-01-31 10:26 AM


...to give us both
time       to heal.

...

sure hearts...

soon to heal

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-01-31 11:12 AM



Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-01-31 12:30 PM


Very pretty piece!
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5 posted 2003-01-31 12:32 PM


Gentle Spirit
Enjoyed the read.

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6 posted 2003-01-31 01:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is lovely, sweet friend, you sound much happier here, and you are so deserving of this joy as I hope you are really feeling! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-01-31 01:10 PM


sounds like things are looking up?
regards2you
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8 posted 2003-01-31 01:35 PM



Donna,

This is beautiful. I love the wa you expressed it. And, the optimum, when both are willing to heal and grow and change, on a personal level. Liked this a lot.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2003-01-31 03:40 PM


Together
held within an understanding
of caring, sharing
and love deep enough
to give us both
time       to heal.
=========================

I told ya you were beautiful  

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-31-2003 03:41 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-01-31 11:21 PM


Love and healing...how well these two so often fit together, Donna.  A wise write, my friend.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-01-31 11:26 PM


Ahhh yes...time to heal.
This is a more positive note Donna.
~Hugs Sweetie~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2003-02-02 12:49 PM


Hopefully time will heal him, and me.  Thanks to everyone for your support and friendship in helping me through what has become a very hard soulful battle.  Peace to all.

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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