Open Poetry #24 |
In The Moonlight |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“IN THE MOONLIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Last night I took a ride on the moon, went from here to there, everywhere, I even rode a moonbeam down to you, you were in the meadow sitting there… Looked into your eyes, mysterious in ways, in ways of expression about how you see, gentle, soft, as you gaze throughout, I felt them when they touched upon me… No words could I say, none were there, just beauty seen sitting in the moonlight, there is only one thing I could ask of you, bring me within you, into this special night… ~~~~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, "just beauty seen sitting in the moonlight"..... I like that picture.... This is soft and sweet and wistful. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-31-2003 08:29 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, With this write I think there is a good chance. Enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You paint a beautifully romantic picture m'friend. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Bill, you always make me smile. Your sweet and gentle spirit shines softly with that moon that guides you to these romantic fields... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, this was pure magic!--moving and mystically marvelous! ---so incredibly romantic....I do believe I enjoyed this! tehe Warm hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, you always make the moonlight shine in your words and I wish for love to writes its signature in cursive across the moon! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovely night indeed... Moonlight is soooo seductive, isn't it??.. Nice one, BCI... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so sweet. I like to read about the moonbeams that bring you to your love. Such beautiful thoughts.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder how you continue to see the world this way...me I was blind to all this years ago |
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