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Open Poetry #24

Here it remains

Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

0 posted 2003-01-31 07:29 AM

Here is my fear
I hold no remorse
This pain is caused by you
And you are the source
I feel sorrow in the day
And cry all night
You were my angel
You used to shine so bright
Deceived by someone who didn’t care
And by love that was never there

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-01-31 07:31 AM

Sun of faith
Well done, enjoyed.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-01-31 08:13 AM

I can feel your emotion here.
It hurts so much more when its someone who doesn't even care, doesn't it?

And since this is the first of your poems I'm reading WELCOME to the Blue pages.
Quite glad to have you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-31 02:15 PM

don't I know this!

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