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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-31 06:54 AM


Home

north, south
east, west
let me
be the
direction magnet
in which
your destination
comes to
rest


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-31-2003 08:36 AM).]

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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2003-01-31 07:28 AM


Magnetism is a wondrous thing... I expect yours is in good working order... Cute write...
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-01-31 07:34 AM


1slick_lady
Easy to understand, enjoyed.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2003-02-01 10:54 AM


Hi Slick Lady,

This was cute, great, I really liked it, needs to be on a card or something.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-02-01 12:05 PM


I agree with Cerenity!

Like this, its simple and sweet

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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