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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-01-30 11:25 PM

I feel the pain of loneliness,
And fear the lance of neverness,
I touch not on night's starlit skies;
Hear not the songs of love's reprise.

Is true love but a fairy tale,
A story that the bards regale?
That I must seek and never find,
A figment of my mortal mind?

I ask myself does love exist,
Is there a love that I have missed?
Is it that my life I squander,
As I seek love in endless wander?

Alone I sit in silent ponder,
As I gaze aloft to welkin's yonder.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-01-31 01:45 AM

Oh no, Tim....
True Love is definitely not a fairy tale. I know it's real,
and I hope that one day you will find it and will know for yourself....

.
.
Now, if you weren't talking about yourself, personally,
you sure did make me think so....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2003-01-31 02:39 AM

There is definitely true love, and once it will cross your path too.

Charisma

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-01-31 07:23 AM

This poem is great, of course... Give Connie an extra special loving hug today, m'friend...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-01-31 08:55 AM

Thank you, Tim...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-01-31 08:58 AM

Tim
The answer is yes and no. LOL, enjoyed

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-01-31 09:03 AM

From what I have read of your poetry in the past, you are a man who knows the answer to the question posed in this heart-tugging poem.

Very touching...

Warm hugs,
EA

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-01-31 11:22 AM

Tim...Sometimes the heart's perception changes, and definitions blurr, while true love remains the same, just waiting for you to come back again.

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

8 posted 2003-01-31 11:50 AM

there is truw love, but getting to it
is another story.

damn, i'm such a pessimist. :smirk:

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-31 01:32 PM

me too, friend...me too

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2003-02-01 01:11 PM

I feel the pain of loneliness,
And fear the lance of neverness,

hmmmm, yes, it does make you wonder!

You conveyed the loneliness so well.

Good poem Tim~

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

11 posted 2003-02-01 02:26 PM

I think it only becomes a fairy tale when you don't allow yourself to believe it exists! Poetry for thought here and a wonderful read.

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

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