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Open Poetry #24

Small talk - senryu

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2003-01-30 02:24 PM

Seeds of images
Thought provoking little gems
Minimalist poems

paladin

....a knight without armor

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-01-30 02:28 PM

Very nicely done. You have mastered the minimal, I would say

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-01-30 02:32 PM

    Fun to read jewels
  wisdom beyond poets years
    diamonds of words
                                  Chris

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-30 02:41 PM

Very nicely done Robert..
In the style you have perfected!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-01-30 02:42 PM

yes... I like this..

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2003-01-30 09:26 PM

i know how much you love these kind of poems... good spreading of the word

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-01-30 09:41 PM

Exactly!!!

Warm angel hugs,
EA

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-31 04:19 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love little seedling poems too, though I usually love to write long song ballads! (big huggsssssss) You have both the roots and wings in your soul, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!