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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
You danced holding wind That lifted hem for peak with fingers splayed in a swish of morning finding long forgotten schoolgirl shy we climbed past steamed windows fumbling zips of light and dripped ourselves into the trees as your smile echoed on smooth bark where pine needle mattress cushioned the push of us and scents merged in swirl of discarded cotton Birdsongs Accompanied your lustful laugh And I recorded it all as Foreplay to another interlude |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You just melted Old Man Winter I do swear, there's a robin out there... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'as your smile echoed on smooth bark where pine needle mattress cushioned the push of us and scents merged in swirl of discarded cotton' Damn you're good.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sunshine.. I'm ready for Old Man Winter to move on...but if there is a Robin out there it may find it a chilly few weeks before we hit spring. Duncan... no way man... but thank you for the nice thought |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
OH, my gosh! This is great....I'm laughing and swooning here, re-reading and enjoying every talented line... Yes, damn, you ARE good. Cannot tell you how much I like this. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron---I'm swooning too. You're on a roll, my friend..keep um coming!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Pat... glad it could both amuse and entice you to read... martie... springtime waits too long here and I am restless to be warm again.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ron, Not laughing, Ha Ha.....I was going to say laughing 'lustfully', here.... but, decided that didn't sound quite right, but what the heck, I get carried away in the moment of good poetry....and, this IS good poetry...smiling here. Good way to start my day. Enjoyed... Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your words a tonic, cap. Even yer restlessness manages to be peaceful. (finding my feet again--  ) |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
Well this is a treat. You have a knack for creating unique word pictures~! Tari |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh myyyy.... I don't dare try to stand just now... You are so very good! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ron, this is beautiful, sweet friend, as far as I am concerned with eternal love there may never be a finale in the symphony! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
ahhhhh..nice, very nice indeed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Spring is good - Here's hoping it brings us more of your intriguing metaphors... |
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