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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-01-30 07:17 AM

The sky was gray bright
Clouds filled and beyond twilight,
The day was trying
But the heavens were crying,
It had been a long sad night.

The sun then broke through
Since rain had naught else to do
Sky tears in sewers
Sidewalk puddles are mirrors
With hopes to reflect some blue.

But returns the gray
It had not gone far away,
Blocking the sun light
Attempting to return night,
Settles for a weeping day.

Gloom

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-01-30 08:58 AM

Though sun cannot shine
bright all the time
the grays are needed
to fill the rhyme...

thank you, Professor!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-30 09:14 AM

Not all can be sunshiny constantly, huh. Kind of makes me appreciate the good times even more....

Thanks for this, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-01-30 10:34 AM

Very well written!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-01-30 01:43 PM

But today the sun begins its shine.
Its warmth has trickled through the ice.
Days of gray may pass this way
but rise we shall, whatever price.

And cut right through the gloom of gray,
push the clouds with breath of sighs
soaking too, each day of new
past walk of gray in blue of skies.

~~*~~
M

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-01-30 01:46 PM

Prof., yeah gray gets in there sometimes, doesn't it?
I enjoyed your poem...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2003-01-30 02:33 PM

Thank you, Sunshine
Filling rhyme with gray is what I do
It’s pleasurable to get a response from you

Thank you, Regards2you,
No, not all sunny, I tend to be just gloom
Glad you enjoyed

Thank you, Brad Majors
For you comment

Thank you, Nakdthoughts
You praise me highly
With such a wonderful poetic response

Thank you, Garysgirl
It mostly gray or darker for me
Pleased you liked

Gloom

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