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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2003-01-29 10:41 PM

If I could place my fingertips
upon your face and trace
a line
of tenderness and trail
my gentle feather touch along
your chin and down your neck
and kiss you lips to lips
to look into your eyes
and gaze
you'd be surprised.
You wouldn't see the longing
nor, the blaze.
Like mirror to mirror
you'd see my adoration
and respect,
my humble knowing
you exist.
Siamese of soul,
there was a joining
way back when
I heard your mind
and
you twinned me,
coupling
even then,
it's just a matter,
of where and when
our beauty to
be blossomed bliss.
Until then,
with open palm
and purse of lips,
I blow to you
a burning kiss.
.
.
.
.
.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-30-2003 08:27 PM).]

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2003-01-29 10:48 PM

Pat, this is so beautiful.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-29 10:52 PM

Well thank you very much. I'm glad you took the time to read and reply. It means a lot to me. Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-29 11:13 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-01-29 11:17 PM

AWESOME!!!!
ThisDiamond

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-01-29 11:32 PM

The adoration that comes with loving speaks for itself.

So soft and pretty Pat~

(I sure do miss my muse)

Tari Miriel
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 69
The state of mind

6 posted 2003-01-29 11:45 PM

Your words shine brilliantly
and flow expressively~

Tari

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2003-01-30 12:08 PM

this is sweet and loving

I once made the promise to myself that before I ever came close to 'falling in love' with someone, I would respect them first.
I love how you presented the humble respect and adoration. Enjoyed.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

8 posted 2003-01-30 01:01 AM

Wow, love this one!!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

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9 posted 2003-01-30 08:51 AM

Thanks to all of you for reading and replying. Appreciate your time.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-01-30 05:06 PM

Pat, you're so good at this. Your words always make so much sense. I love the thoughts you hold on love, its reality, with a bit of magic!

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-01-30 05:17 PM

nice

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

12 posted 2003-01-30 05:23 PM

(smiling)... ever get hung up at bells ford?
Hear the ice is treacherous there.. this one might be warm enough to melt it though...

enjoyed...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-01-30 06:16 PM

Well now, it appears to me that the sage is also sensuous! Ooo la la loverly, Pat!

Warm hugs and a great big smile!
Linda

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

14 posted 2003-01-30 06:51 PM

Gemma,

What nice things you say. Thank you, gotta have that bit of magic though,
huh?...glad you read and enjoyed..

Vandana...thanks!

Ron,

I love to swim. Smiling and laughing here.... Thanks for reading and replying....censoring all other thoughts or I'd be writing your next chapter....(of Bell's Ford)...

Linda,

I just got in. So glad you're back here. Glad you liked...still smiling myself....thanks...

Hugs to you all, glad you enjoyed,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-31-2003 07:39 AM).]

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

15 posted 2003-01-30 07:44 PM

ah yes~ your poetry has such a sense of truth!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2003-01-30 08:48 PM

Pat--You did this so well, with the sensual feel, yet the etherial of a soul love. Wonderful!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

17 posted 2003-01-30 10:19 PM

Soooo beautiful, Pat!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

18 posted 2003-01-31 02:00 AM

Hey Pat

I love this poem....you knew I would, didn't you?????
Me being the hopeless romatic that I am.....
You really did good at writing this, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

19 posted 2003-01-31 07:18 AM

Dear Pat, these are beautiful words you have shared with us today, close and tender, equals in life and in its sharing, you brought a relationship to life and have granted us some tenderness to share in.
Thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

20 posted 2003-01-31 10:18 AM

Goid,

Thanks for reading and replying.

Martie,

Thank you for mentioning the sensual and the etherial coming together...
I planned it that way and glad you could see and feel it....

Denise,

I was just wondering where you went. Haven't seen you here a day or two (?)
I love your poetry....thank you for the soooo beautiful....

Ethel,

Of course you would, lucky lady!

Rick,

How nice of you to read and reply. Good to see you, back here on the blue...thanks for your comments.

Hugs to all, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

21 posted 2003-01-31 01:22 PM

(smiles) Oh Patricia, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too have this feeling ever so much in my heart now, I already love my girl so much but I have never met her, don't know her name and don't know where she is but I always blow kisses to her! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

22 posted 2003-01-31 01:30 PM

Oh, Noah,

How wonderful for you to have found some peace and ability to let go that which just didn't work. I love this new outlook of yours, and I suspect there are many blown kisses on the wind....thanks for replying,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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