Open Poetry #24 |
A Burning Kiss |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
If I could place my fingertips upon your face and trace a line of tenderness and trail my gentle feather touch along your chin and down your neck and kiss you lips to lips to look into your eyes and gaze you'd be surprised. You wouldn't see the longing nor, the blaze. Like mirror to mirror you'd see my adoration and respect, my humble knowing you exist. Siamese of soul, there was a joining way back when I heard your mind and you twinned me, coupling even then, it's just a matter, of where and when our beauty to be blossomed bliss. Until then, with open palm and purse of lips, I blow to you a burning kiss. . . . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-30-2003 08:27 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Pat, this is so beautiful. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well thank you very much. I'm glad you took the time to read and reply. It means a lot to me. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
AWESOME!!!! ThisDiamond |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The adoration that comes with loving speaks for itself. So soft and pretty Pat~ (I sure do miss my muse) |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
Your words shine brilliantly and flow expressively~ Tari |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is sweet and loving I once made the promise to myself that before I ever came close to 'falling in love' with someone, I would respect them first. I love how you presented the humble respect and adoration. Enjoyed. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Wow, love this one!! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks to all of you for reading and replying. Appreciate your time. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Pat, you're so good at this. Your words always make so much sense. I love the thoughts you hold on love, its reality, with a bit of magic! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling)... ever get hung up at bells ford? Hear the ice is treacherous there.. this one might be warm enough to melt it though... enjoyed... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well now, it appears to me that the sage is also sensuous! Ooo la la loverly, Pat! Warm hugs and a great big smile! Linda |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gemma, What nice things you say. Thank you, gotta have that bit of magic though, huh?...glad you read and enjoyed.. Vandana...thanks! Ron, I love to swim. Smiling and laughing here.... Thanks for reading and replying....censoring all other thoughts or I'd be writing your next chapter....(of Bell's Ford)... Linda, I just got in. So glad you're back here. Glad you liked...still smiling myself....thanks... Hugs to you all, glad you enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-31-2003 07:39 AM).] |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
ah yes~ your poetry has such a sense of truth! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pat--You did this so well, with the sensual feel, yet the etherial of a soul love. Wonderful! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooo beautiful, Pat! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Pat I love this poem....you knew I would, didn't you????? Me being the hopeless romatic that I am..... You really did good at writing this, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Pat, these are beautiful words you have shared with us today, close and tender, equals in life and in its sharing, you brought a relationship to life and have granted us some tenderness to share in. Thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Goid, Thanks for reading and replying. Martie, Thank you for mentioning the sensual and the etherial coming together... I planned it that way and glad you could see and feel it.... Denise, I was just wondering where you went. Haven't seen you here a day or two (?) I love your poetry....thank you for the soooo beautiful.... Ethel, Of course you would, lucky lady! Rick, How nice of you to read and reply. Good to see you, back here on the blue...thanks for your comments. Hugs to all, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Patricia, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too have this feeling ever so much in my heart now, I already love my girl so much but I have never met her, don't know her name and don't know where she is but I always blow kisses to her! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, Noah, How wonderful for you to have found some peace and ability to let go that which just didn't work. I love this new outlook of yours, and I suspect there are many blown kisses on the wind....thanks for replying, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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