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Open Poetry #24

Death of Love

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-01-29 05:55 PM

It hurts to know
That love is dead
When the one you love
Gives you nothing but
Broken promises

You want it to
Work out
But you know it can't

Death to Love
Death to Love
Is all you can scream
And shout

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-01-29 06:18 PM

true love is never dead, it may change it's course, but if you felt loved and were loved, then it is always in you, maybe put away, but the feelings were real and alive.

hugss
M

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-01-29 07:29 PM

the_loner_23 - it may be dead for now, but it has a strange way of showing up once again...

BC

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

3 posted 2003-01-29 07:31 PM

very good poem...its very well written and to the point..

Akira
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ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

4 posted 2003-01-29 08:38 PM

The love isn't dead. I just couldn't get on.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-01-29 09:27 PM

True words spoken back at you Julie.
Intense write. ThisDiamond

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-30 02:29 AM

yes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-01-30 03:19 AM

Nice expression of your thoughts on love...James

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

8 posted 2003-01-30 06:45 AM

Death to love is all you can scream and shout....

but reserection is what it's all about

Great release of emotion in this piece. I applaud you greatly!

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