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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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Friendschip and love are two things i value With one jealous at the other I now wonder what to do That vicious green-eyed monster planted a knife in my eye Falling tears following their destiny all but one wondering ...why... Why does jealousy rule your view while you do know I love you Is it that hard to just trust me jealousy hurts.. can't you see? The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
tough dealing with jealousy..and tough not to feel it at times... enjoyed the poem... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes, that monster has taken ahold of me several times...but I have gotten much better and don't let it get the best of me anymore. nice write...made me feel M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Interesting write. Jealousy, I view as a form of compliment. However, the greater issue here seems to be someone trusting you. Trust and jealousy two real parts of living and loving. Thank you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
something we all should remember |
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