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Open Poetry #24

When Sleep Wins...

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2003-01-29 12:21 PM

I wish I could lay
in your arms
feeling the warmth
and serenity
of our bodies
cupped together
like morning dew
on leafs
whispering "I love you's"
into each others ears
until
there is silence
between us
when sleep wins...

I miss you... mijn lief...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-01-29 12:59 PM

a nice warm write *s
M

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2003-01-29 02:18 PM

ah lovely penned...

Charisma

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-29 02:21 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Neeraja, I'm so sorry you had to say goodbye to your love recently again, but I know with my heart it will only be a temporary farewell and soon you two will be together forever! (kiss on cheek) I send angel hugs of comfort out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

4 posted 2003-01-29 02:23 PM

Great write, got me right in the heart.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-01-29 07:36 PM

Neeraja - yes, to be missed is like this write...

BC

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-29 07:46 PM

I understand this totally and completely.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-01-30 02:33 AM

aw...this is so touching!

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