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Neeraja
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0 posted 2003-01-29 12:21 PM




I wish I could lay
in your arms
feeling the warmth
and serenity
of our bodies
cupped together
like morning dew
on leafs
whispering "I love you's"
into each others ears
until
there is silence
between us
when sleep wins...

I miss you... mijn lief...

© Copyright 2003 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-01-29 12:59 PM


a nice warm write *s
M

Charisma
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2 posted 2003-01-29 02:18 PM


ah lovely penned...

Charisma

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3 posted 2003-01-29 02:21 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Neeraja, I'm so sorry you had to say goodbye to your love recently again, but I know with my heart it will only be a temporary farewell and soon you two will be together forever! (kiss on cheek) I send angel hugs of comfort out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-29 02:23 PM


Great write, got me right in the heart.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-01-29 07:36 PM


Neeraja - yes, to be missed is like this write...

BC

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6 posted 2003-01-29 07:46 PM


I understand this totally and completely.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-01-30 02:33 AM


aw...this is so touching!
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