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Butterfly Kisses |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
A slow bathing, lip smooth run feathering your being with butterfly kisses of frilly lashes like sight, unseen tickling your flush delicately, dazzling us. And, our alignment of hips, as we Eskimo kiss, heightens bliss, awakening, my deepest want and meeting your greatest need. ~It's all in the eyes!~ . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-20-2002 06:01 AM).] |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Beautiful! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
loved. patricia, i always look forward to seeing your next post. your poetry always has a distinctive flow. lots of love, gemmaxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I love it......  (I knew I would, though, if you wrote it) Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us. The love in you shines through very brightly, friend.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sparkling  Such wonder to behold...ThisDiamond |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A absolutely warm and delightful write Pat. Very enjoyed! |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
ooooOOooooOOoooo .. tish tosh! sasssssy. this is tasty, i love it. yum, :bite: ***** [*****] -chris. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful and softly sensual Pat. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sigheyes, Thanks for the reply. Glad you thought it beautiful. Gemtop, Thank you for replying. Appreciate it. Ethel, I told you I would write it, but the eskimo and butterfly kisses.... I told you about, well, a baby theme wouldn't work well, so had to get imaginative and spice it up a little....a lot! I knew you'd love it, too. smiling....glad you did, yes, this is indeed ~loving~ ThisDiamond, Nice compliment. Thank you for taking the time. Gentle Spirit, So glad you read and enjoyed. Thanks. Christian, A 5-star, from you? Glad you love it. Enchantress, Glad you read and for your lovely reply. Thanks so much. Hugs to you all, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it is...so I've been told. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Oh my... The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Is it...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The eyes say so much...soft caressing write,Pat.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
regards2you - I love butterfly kisses... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pat....girl, are ya trying to warm the weather up? WEll...ya did it!!! Nicely done, like the descriptions... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Pat, I just think there's nothing better than butterfly kisses. This was so snuggly special. Hugs ~ Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is an Eskimo kiss of a gorgeous love poem! (kiss on cheek) I wish for this joy to always touch your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
"feathering your being with butterfly kisses" is one of the original things I've picked out. Good to know that passion is an eternal flame that never burns out. Hope to read more of you. [This message has been edited by winston (12-20-2002 07:56 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pat...a sweet sensation, told with great style.  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
interesting. i am curious about the connection between eyes and eskimo kisses? just being nosey (no pun intended!) have you ever heard "Butterfly Kisses" by Bob Carlisle. Nothing like this, but a cool song. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love butterfly kisses, birdie kisses, Eskimo kisses, Fren** kisses (whoops! that one kind of slipped out!) tehe Precious poetry, from a precious poetess! warm hugs, Linda |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I'm giving this one to my boyfriend...we had an argument just last week about Butterfly kisses. He said they were short little peck kisses....and I said NO, they are the fluttering of eyes ...meeting. *S* Oh I love being right...and this is the perfect poem to prove it. Thank You!!!! Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks to all who've responded. Glad you like this. Hugs, Pat Christopher, The connection between eyes and eskimo kisses would be the face. Tsk ! Being silly.... and love making at it's finest. Don't quite understand your question and no, I don't think I've heard the song. It's all in the eyes is in reference to "feathering your being with butterfly kisses", but, also love is telling "in the eyes"....(2 meanings) An Eskimo kiss is rubbing noses, so short of being too explicit, that would have been next position taken... Use your own imagination, these two do not have a boring sex life!!! I could have ended the poem at dazzling us....but, a little too short the two phrases: butterfly kisses and eskimo kisses were in a conversation that morning I had regardg. my grandson, and I said, "Hey, those two phrases would be great in a poem!" I choose not to write a baby poem.... but incorprated the phrases in an "adult" poem.... Why? Because I wanted to... Thanks for asking and I hope this explains a little more..... So glad you read and commented. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Salty, Smiling here. Yes, it is in the eyelashes, swept across skin...like most delicate feathering..... When my daughter was a small child we always shared "butterfly kisses"... on our faces.... I've taught my baby grandson to eskimo kiss and he belly laughs every time, and am trying for butterfly kisses on his fat little cheeks but he hasn't gained enough eye control to do it, or quite get it yet...... and if you see note above is how this poem came about. I realized "butterfly kisses" can very much be apart of love making, too..... Didn't want to write a baby poem. Am tryig to be creative and write from brain not emotion....a baby poem, for one thing, probably would be too sickeningly sweet....cause I do get all gaga over children...smiling here.... Thanks for your reply Pat Why did I write this. Am trying to write daily....these phrases just a starting point. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
 - And so it was that time stood still - |
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