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Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-29 02:26 PM

~Emotions~

At the end of the day,
The sun falls,
With lunar uprising,
And in all the world it is evening,
While the shadows of light go passing,
To true to the ever duanting beliefes,
But to me,
To be true is to give into the,
Emotions,
The,
Love,
That is inside me,
With each passing moment,
As the light from the shadows show that,
What I feel is true,
All of those,
Emotions,
For you,
Do you feel them to?
Do you feel a love for me?
For each waking moment is a dream,
And each dream causes me to awaken,
To find that all of these,
Emotions,
Are true,
That all of thses,
Emotions,
Are for you,
And they are all that is in my heart,
Thesem
Emotions,
For you.

This is the last of my love poems, I'm not rightly inspired to write anymore of them. Hope you all enjoy them.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2003-01-29 03:27 PM

enjoyed it

Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-01-29 03:29 PM

love poems are always to be enjoyed... this no exception

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-30 03:13 AM

I'm not much into love poems myself...the muchy romantic stuff...yuck! Maybe I'm just gettin' too old...

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

4 posted 2003-01-31 08:28 AM

love your poem...

it triggered this
=============
emotions play across your face
you cannot hide from me your soul
dancing in your eyes in light
i see your spirt rise and shine

emotions of all your heart holds
touch my life in untold ways
how could i look into your eyes
and not love what plays across your face
=============
keep writing...
if not of love, then
something!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-01-31 09:42 AM

You're a romantic Bard... Keep on writing - You're doing just fine...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-01-31 11:32 AM

You may not be inspired to write them anymore, but perhaps if did write more, and as though you had the kind of love that you desire, you may manifest it into being! Just a thought!--perhaps a selfish one on my part--I don't want you to stop writing love poems! tehe

Warm hugs,
Linda

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

7 posted 2003-01-31 11:48 AM

line breaks serve well for you here--the
single word lines i mean.

love poems get old, i have to admit,
but you held your ground with this one
and kept me reading. cool.

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