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Open Poetry #24

Trace

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-29 01:47 PM

Trace

laying here
I trace
the strength
of your
soft smile
and in
these lines
I realize
then
and only
then
how much
I truly
love you

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

1 posted 2003-01-29 01:57 PM

Very well writen, very much enjoyed the read.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-01-29 02:19 PM

Pensive moments... surely the best of the best...

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

3 posted 2003-01-29 04:03 PM

I like the way this rolled off my lips as I read it, it surely flowed as nicely as the message.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-01-29 05:38 PM

such a beautiful write..one I wish I had written...loved it
M

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