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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2003-01-29 12:28 PM



Love and Hate
Day and Night
Birth and Death
Wrong and Right

Faith and Hope
I want to cry
Peace and Joy
I want to die

White and Black
Peace and War
Better and Worse
Rich and Poor

Despair and loss
I want to share.
Who are you?
I want to care.

Heaven and Hell
Mean and Nice
Light and Darkness
Fire and Ice

Up and Down
Hot and Cold
Sun and Moon
Young and old

What is love?
Do I really care?
…Searching for something already there…
For you I send a prayer.

Late and early
Snow and Rain
Angels and Demons
Pleasure and Pain

How can I pray for you this night?
For if I could,
and if I might,
For you I’d make it seem alright.

There’s nothing in this heart for you, but, yes, I would still die for you.

...I would strip myself of this cruel mortal coil for thee..

You are an angel,
flying high,
Do not be fooled,
You'll never die.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

© Copyright 2003 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-29 01:37 AM


EagleScorpion, this is a really unique poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-29 03:57 AM


I almost felt like this was for me...very well done!
Neeraja
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3 posted 2003-01-29 04:35 AM


I love this poem!!!

Wonderful words and cleverly written!!!

Neeraja

Tracey
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4 posted 2003-01-29 07:00 AM


This captured my attention this morning. I like the flow and the rythm and the thoughts in it.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-01-29 07:02 AM


very strong words, liked this
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-01-29 07:40 AM


I would strip myself of this cruel mortal coil for thee..
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very cool line ... such devotion in this write, quite the poetic declaration...
well done groovy one
good to read you this morn.
jm

Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky.
We fell them down and turn them into paper that
we may record our emptiness.

K.G.

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
7 posted 2003-01-30 12:36 PM


thanks guys!!
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