Open Poetry #24 |
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I Would Die For You, My Angel |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever ![]() |
Love and Hate Day and Night Birth and Death Wrong and Right Faith and Hope I want to cry Peace and Joy I want to die White and Black Peace and War Better and Worse Rich and Poor Despair and loss I want to share. Who are you? I want to care. Heaven and Hell Mean and Nice Light and Darkness Fire and Ice Up and Down Hot and Cold Sun and Moon Young and old What is love? Do I really care? …Searching for something already there… For you I send a prayer. Late and early Snow and Rain Angels and Demons Pleasure and Pain How can I pray for you this night? For if I could, and if I might, For you I’d make it seem alright. There’s nothing in this heart for you, but, yes, I would still die for you. ...I would strip myself of this cruel mortal coil for thee.. You are an angel, flying high, Do not be fooled, You'll never die. I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
EagleScorpion, this is a really unique poem. I really enjoyed reading it. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I almost felt like this was for me...very well done! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I love this poem!!! Wonderful words and cleverly written!!! Neeraja |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This captured my attention this morning. I like the flow and the rythm and the thoughts in it. You can never win or lose |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very strong words, liked this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would strip myself of this cruel mortal coil for thee.. =============================== very cool line ... such devotion in this write, quite the poetic declaration... well done groovy one ![]() good to read you this morn. jm Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
thanks guys!! |
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