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The Wind Calm and Destructive
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The Wind Calm and Destructive |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
The wind strong and destructive calm and seductive calls to me with a mournful sound the soul recognizes mirrored reflections, kindred spirits the wind and I sweep me to places seen in visions soothe me with the melodies sung to the moon and stars at night hold me in an embrace and ease the longing my intimate friend for only you understand this restlessness I possess only you understand ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, I like this I have my own restless wind inside and although seemingly calm tends toward destruction. Gloom |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
I have my own restless wind inside and although seemingly calm tends toward destruction. Gloom Yes, I understand. I never know what to expect from me, except change.....is evident~! Thank you for reading Gloom and your comments, I hope you are doing alright~! ((hugz)) ATov~ ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this, and I can relate well. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Oh I think I understand your restlessness...your description is vivid. A most intriguing write sister...Very impressive. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for sharing this, for it brought something up from my memory banks, an old tune I remember hearing as a child. I know it as 'The Wayward Wind' but that may not be the correct title. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
your words interweave with each other [regardless the breaks]. i adore that style of write. it's so flowy, and its laced with such a beautiful ending. 'only you understand'. sigh. you make depressed [thats a good thing by the way]. -chris. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A Tone of Voice, I don't believe I've read your work before, but when you speak of the wind and give it the colour of mood, I know I will be reading you again. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
passingshadows, I'm pleased you can relate~Thankyou~! Salty, well now why am I not surprised you can understand my restlessness....?Thank you mucho~kiddo~! Midnitesun~~ oh my, the wayward wind is a restless wind, a restless wind that yearns to wander, now that is a ~step~ back in time, absolutely, cool song too~! Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. Christian, Thank you, I'm not sure I understand you depressed, but if it's a good thing, I'll take it, shoot, if it's a bad think I'll take It. I'll take whatever I can get.....*grin* THANKS for your ten cents, I do appreciate your comments very much, good or bad.....as long as they're constructive~! *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hold me in an embrace and ease the longing my intimate friend for only you understand this restlessness I possess only you understand not sure a plea such as this could be resisted by a sane man... nicely done Tone.. I enjoyed |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Kethry, thank you very much......yes the color of mood. I like to think of the elements as real possessing personalities of their own. The wind is very fickel subject to change and rearrange often, I'd say a lot like me.....*S* |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
CPat, something I enjoy doing and have for a long time is to attribute personalities to the elements. Salty and I were in a ~killer~ tornado years ago and it seemed as if it was a gigantic monster.....Thank you so much for your comments, a sane man huh? smiling here~! |
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