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Open Poetry #24

Forever

GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 15
Savannah, GA

0 posted 2002-12-17 10:50 PM

This is a short poem I wrote to my girlfriend. I think its quiet nice.

I touch your face
And my heart starts to race
I hold your hand
And I start to understand
Everyone else can't see,
We we're meant to be
Always together,
The true meaning of FOREVER.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2002-12-17 11:11 PM

Hey, welcome to Pip! enjoy the blue pages.
Great poem there, I'll bet she loved it!

Keep writin'.
Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-18 01:34 AM

pretty romantic, yes

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-19 03:59 PM

GeorgiaPaver~
Yes...this is quite nice.
Lovely write.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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