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Open Poetry #24

Simplistic Poem

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-28 02:57 PM

I find w/ love, more often then not the simplest of words mean the most, for they are straight forward and cannot be confused by anything else. On that note, I wrote this for that 'one-day'. Anyway, tell me what you all think.

~My love for you~

The sun and moon pass,
People may come and people may go,
But only one thing I know,
Remains a constant,
That remains in my heart to be true,
My love for you.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

1 posted 2003-01-28 02:58 PM

The simplest of words can explain the complicatest matters, as love ...
You showed this with a nice write

Hugs, kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

2 posted 2003-01-28 03:01 PM

Thanks, I'm glad that the message went through. I've a talent for using to many words, so, it's nice to see a small piece carry its own weight.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

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