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A lovers' absence
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A lovers' absence |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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Yearn for affection A sweet word, soft kiss, or hug Feeling rejection... A lovers' absence Huge gap in hearts' desire Hopefully a pretense... Moody minds' ghost hunt Emotive times agone Once hearts' pain less blunt... Return loving hope Brighten up humble days Force my life to lope... The greatest thing u'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return *hugs* Kelly. [This message has been edited by zenny (01-28-2003 02:42 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
zenny Reads like a phase to me, enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Force my life to lope.... like that line... and the images it can conjour up.. enjoyed the read. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
seymour- thanks for reading .. maybe it's a phase.. probably... i'm happy you enjoyed reading it though  cpat-Thanks for reading and replying, you brought a smile upon my face The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Poetic Bard Member
since 2003-01-22
Posts 84Canada, BC |
A wonderful poem, I loved every word, something I'm sure alot of us, including myself, can relate to. I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
poetic bard- a feeling many people may relate to sometimes, but one which i don't wish to overcome to my worst enemies, if even i had those Thanks for your nice reply |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi,I like this, it feels right. Sandra |
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