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ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-01-28 06:13 AM


Empty
  missing
  loss of me

    wishing

To feel
  a taunt
  so unreal

    to want

Longing
  intense
  avoiding

    

    absence


[This message has been edited by ctowen (01-28-2003 06:13 AM).]

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Tari Miriel
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since 2003-01-28
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The state of mind
1 posted 2003-01-28 09:20 AM


Touching and haunting~
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-01-28 09:26 AM


Very interesting write..
in so few words.
Well done Craig.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2003-01-28 05:22 PM


This does say it all, Craig.
Hugs
Sandra

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2003-01-28 06:00 PM


expand your hurt
the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-01-28 06:01 PM


I feel the pain in these words. Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-01-29 05:10 AM


nicely done...I can relate
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-01-31 01:54 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Craig, this is a haunting and touching poem, sweet friend, I hope now the absence has been filled with acceptance, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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