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Please Tell Me... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Oh, won't you please tell me just what did I do, that makes me seem so ugly to you? Was it my truth? Was it my light? Would you rather hide from my sight? How much hurt can I take, before this heart finally breaks? Oh, how I wish you would tell me the truth... what is it that makes me so ugly to you..... I must have had my momma's will |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
this gives me the shivers....so heart breaking.... truth and Light will usually do it, though....to one without honesty..... many warm hugs to you...Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Donna...this is terribly sad sweetie. I do hope you are okay.... But write it out..it helps. ~Heart hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Was it my truth? Was it my light? Would you rather hide from my sight? Nothing ugly about this or the spirit that composed it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are not ugly to anyone..probably too soft hearted though... but that is what makes you so special hugss M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Donna, you are not ugly at all. You have a sweet and kind heart. I do hope you are okay! |
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seven_conscious Junior Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 33 |
this is my first post here, and as i was considering how to verbalize my thoughts i noticed your words "tell me why it would work better another way..." something so straight from the soul can work no better way. beautifully truthful. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I repeat everything the others have said. Some one with a heart and spirit like yours is not ugly in any way at all, my friend.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Pain and self-recrimination pour off the page...although something in me says the fault lies somewhere else.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna - I would say it is the ugliness inside of the one who has hurt you which lashes out and leaves you so unnerved. I hope all is well with you my friend. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
In such hurt you create so much beauty. I can feel the emotions of the words. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, the truth must always be told but I can understand how heartbreaking it can be to have to accept it! (sad sigh) You may have no choice but to take the tears in order to grow strong again later on, I send angel hugs of courage out to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Wow. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it doesn't really matter what anyone thinks about you Donna...it's what you think of yourself...and from what you have written, I know you believe you are beautiful, and so do I! so there! ...and you can tell the person this poem was written for to just kiss yer...  [This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-28-2003 01:48 AM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Many of us have been is these shoes...and I can tell you...there not worth wearing *S* Writing is very well executed. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
Surprisingly, it's the 'not knowing', the enormous ache of the unanswered questions, that hurt most~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sometimes it is not that we are ugly to others eyes at all, but that they feel shame or inadequate for some reason in front of us... and other times...it is the ugly in them they can't face. Either way..while we all do ugly things from time to time...You are not ugly... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks to everyone, I appreciate it. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Lovely lady, you have a heart filled with love and it shines on all of us here. I am sorry for your sorrow and hope you can see that you are beautiful and you are special. Hugs, Marti |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You Break It I've tried so hard to tell you but its fallen on deaf ears... how hard you've been on my heart. If that's the way you wanna play I cant compete ... You've given me the bitter now I want the sweet. You know everything you do ... comes back on you ... everything you do ... comes back on you If you can hear me ... consider this a warning ... something your mama left out. When its concerning matters of the heart ... you better play fair right from the start. cuz, everything you do ... comes back on you ... everything you do ... comes back on you If you break it..you pay for it ... You break my heart ... you pay for it. Maybe you would choose not to believe it ... Maybe you'll just hide your eyes ... But the truth has a strange way of revealing, and my heart wont pay the price ... everything you do ... comes back on you ... everything you do ... comes back on you If you break it..you pay for it ... You break my heart ... you pay for it. Yes, truth sees thru all disguise ... and my heart will not be the price. Diana DeWitt John Tesh |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again, my thanks to all from my heart.... |
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