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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-01-27 07:55 PM



Sculpted Snow

Wind shaped drift of snow
Surface sculpted to soft mounds
Shadows created by sun.

believe in what your heart feels...

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paladin
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1 posted 2003-01-27 07:57 PM


Very good.You should write more haiku.

paladin

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2 posted 2003-01-27 08:20 PM




Yes! Perfectly pictured in such a few words...enjoyed this memory....so far very little snow this winter....hope it stays a memory....

Pat

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3 posted 2003-01-27 08:20 PM


Beautiful!
scorpio
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4 posted 2003-01-27 08:49 PM


Thank you,Robert...I enjoy this form of expression and I'll take your advice..

Pat, glad you enjoyed...not much snow here either...but lots of cold..

I appreciate your read Martie...

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2003-01-27 09:07 PM



....and he said....

Watch the deer come close
just outside the cottage door
hoof tracks in the snow.

*Well done Scorpio!  You do these very well indeed.*
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2003-01-27 09:26 PM


Thank you, Enchantress...your reply warm my heart on this cold January night...I'm sure you would charm those timid creatures into eating from your warm hand...

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2003-01-27 09:42 PM


Enjoyed...James
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8 posted 2003-01-27 09:47 PM


As light as the air that carries it...
Wonderful. ThisDiamond

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9 posted 2003-01-27 09:48 PM


So beautiful, Scorpio....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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10 posted 2003-01-27 10:15 PM




(smiles) Oh Scorpio, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile though I miss the snow so much as it has been muy caliente here in Colorado! (big hugggsssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
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11 posted 2003-01-27 10:16 PM


Thank you, James..

Exactly, ThisDiamond...the wind is the artist..

I'm glad you enjoyed this, Ethel...thanks for your comments..

believe in what your heart feels...

scorpio
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12 posted 2003-01-27 10:22 PM


Thank you, Noah..if I could find a way I send you some snow..

believe in what your heart feels...

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Mine, all mine!

scorpio
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14 posted 2003-01-28 07:39 AM


Karilea..you flatter me..thank you..

believe in what your heart feels...

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15 posted 2003-01-28 01:57 PM



Burrow into warm
quilted sounds melting layers
icicles drip plink

scorpio
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16 posted 2003-01-28 04:47 PM


Lady in White, thank you...A few warmer days and the plink will be welcomed sound..

believe in what your heart feels...

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