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Open Poetry #24

Before Doors Shut

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-01-27 07:46 PM

Follow courtesy
Vanity not required
Poetry will do

[Paladin, you've got me on a 5-7-5 kick...
almost as bad as peanuts.]

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-27-2003 07:48 PM).]

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

1 posted 2003-01-27 07:49 PM

He,he,he *evil grin*

paladin

....a knight without armor

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-01-27 08:25 PM

Sunshine - 5-7-5, nicely written...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-27 08:53 PM

They are catching huh?

Good one Karilea!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

jade dragoness
Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 76

4 posted 2003-01-27 08:55 PM

LOL. Keep all those doors open. You never know who or what might show up.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-01-27 08:59 PM

Yes, Karilea...I love these, too. Aren't they fun to write? You or Nan or someone should start another of those "Passions Choaka", (or whatever it's called) lol.
It's really fun, anyway. So much can be said in those few words.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2003-01-27 09:01 PM

Expressed wonderfully through poetry..

believe in what your heart feels...

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-01-27 09:03 PM

Karilea---And you do it so well!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2003-01-27 09:11 PM

Karilea, my absolute favorite type of poem whether it be a haiku or a senryu.

Great job ... hugs, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2003-01-27 09:41 PM

Karilea, you do these very well.

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