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paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2003-01-27 04:11 PM

Forlorned in a vase
Dry pedals fall from bare stems
Silently crying

paladin

....a knight without armor

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-01-27 04:20 PM

Image tinged with sadness...enjoyed..

believe in what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-01-27 04:24 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope this feeling doesn't relate to you right now, may your hearts vase always bloom with happy healthy flowers, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-27 05:38 PM

There are a couple ways to view this.
I like the image you created....I've seen it multiple times, my house and others....

I enjoyed this....true to life....

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2003-01-27 05:58 PM

Another great Haiku.

enjoyed once more

Maree.

jade dragoness
Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 76

5 posted 2003-01-27 06:45 PM

gathered scents enclosed
mourning loss of sweet beauty
holding onto tears

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-01-27 07:22 PM

Crushed under his foot,
A violet dies...the girl
Returns his gold ring.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-01-27 07:33 PM

color's faded scents
bring breath of may to winter
love springs eternal

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2003-01-27 07:38 PM

Robert, there is so much emotion in your haiku. Gosh, I nearly cried when I read this. Great job...

Marti

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-01-27 09:43 PM

From having no love
The petals silently fell
From the red roses

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-01-27 09:45 PM

Wish they didn't die so fast...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2003-01-27 09:48 PM

Endings painted so well my friend.
ThisDiamond

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