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paladin
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0 posted 2003-01-27 04:11 PM


Forlorned in a vase
Dry pedals fall from bare stems
Silently crying

paladin

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1 posted 2003-01-27 04:20 PM


Image tinged with sadness...enjoyed..

believe in what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2003-01-27 04:24 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope this feeling doesn't relate to you right now, may your hearts vase always bloom with happy healthy flowers, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2003-01-27 05:38 PM



There are a couple ways to view this.
I like the image you created....I've seen it multiple times, my house and others....

I enjoyed this....true to life....

Pat

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4 posted 2003-01-27 05:58 PM


Another  great Haiku.

enjoyed once more

Maree.

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5 posted 2003-01-27 06:45 PM


gathered scents enclosed
mourning loss of sweet beauty
holding onto tears

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6 posted 2003-01-27 07:22 PM



Crushed under his foot,
A violet dies...the girl
Returns his gold ring.

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7 posted 2003-01-27 07:33 PM



color's faded scents
bring breath of may to winter
love springs eternal

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8 posted 2003-01-27 07:38 PM


Robert, there is so much emotion in your haiku. Gosh, I nearly cried when I read this.  Great job...

Marti

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9 posted 2003-01-27 09:43 PM


From having no love
The petals silently fell
From the red roses

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10 posted 2003-01-27 09:45 PM


Wish they didn't die so fast...James
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11 posted 2003-01-27 09:48 PM


Endings painted so well my friend.
ThisDiamond

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