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paladin
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0 posted 2003-01-27 02:11 PM


Rustle of the leaves
Standing tall against the sky
Keeping mysteries

paladin

....a knight without armor

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1 posted 2003-01-27 02:15 PM


paladin - oooh, lovely!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-01-27 02:20 PM




(smiles) Wow, I love this, so concealed is the beauty in those forests, this reminded me of the legend of the Bamboo Woman I heard when I was in third grade and the red Bengal tiger! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2003-01-27 02:20 PM


Indian grasses
eight foot heads waving golden
hawk cries calling back

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4 posted 2003-01-27 02:28 PM


Oh, the mysteries hidden among the tall trees and graces!  Wonderful haiku Robert.

Hugs, Marti

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with our music still inside of us.

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5 posted 2003-01-27 03:11 PM


very nicely done... leaves on wondering at the mystery of it all.
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6 posted 2003-01-27 03:22 PM


Well done, Robert..

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2003-01-27 03:38 PM


paladin,
A good haiku, enjoyed.

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8 posted 2003-01-27 05:50 PM


ahhh yes, I like this alot... espcially that last line.

Great Haiku.

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9 posted 2003-01-27 06:42 PM


bamboo shoots bring luck
fair winds bring gentle raindrops
drink from the heavens

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10 posted 2003-01-27 07:25 PM



What a strange carpet
the rain weaves with its pattern
of leaves and brown twigs...

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11 posted 2003-01-30 03:32 AM


Enjoyed...wish I could fill my yard with bamboo...James
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12 posted 2003-01-30 06:47 AM


Very nicely done!  
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13 posted 2003-01-30 06:59 AM


touching heaven's gate,
leaves listen as the wind brings
songs of the angels

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14 posted 2003-01-30 07:39 AM


Leaving mysteries
Bared in winter forest's bough
Snows embrace till spring

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15 posted 2003-01-30 09:27 AM


inspired and inspiring, apparently...look at all the senyru and haiku you prompted!

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I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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16 posted 2003-01-30 09:44 AM


Lovely~

Tari

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makes me want to go
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