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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-01-27 01:38 PM


Loving You

I can love you
from far away
remembering the first time
you took my hand
and shaped the days to come.

I can love you
from far away
remembering the first time
your lips rested upon mine
and a warmth spread through
to wake the numb.

I can love you
from far away
when darkness sets
and memories play
and the face of you
lights up my dreams
when you're not here
in the depth of my stay.

I can love you
from afar
when time stands still
and we are...
as we are.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Charisma
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1 posted 2003-01-27 01:41 PM


love it!!

Charisma

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-01-27 01:43 PM


Thank you Charisma...
*s
M

bklynboy
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3 posted 2003-01-27 02:17 PM


Nice....brought back some pleasant memories.
regards2you
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4 posted 2003-01-27 06:04 PM




~M~

I like this. Soft and special....though you speak of no pain it is there, buffered by acceptance, but there.....(maybe mine is, and I don't realize it...smiling here...)
A good write!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-01-27 06:38 PM


Hey bklynboy, memories can be sweet can't they... or is it only after we forget the hurt *s
M

Pat,          
It was meant to be soft and special with feeling including  acceptance...thank you *s
hugs
M

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-01-27 08:21 PM


nakdthoughts - nice thoughts from you...

BC

Martie
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7 posted 2003-01-27 08:23 PM


Maureen...."and we are...
as we are."  If you can love like that, it is a true love.  

SmartChick
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8 posted 2003-01-27 10:05 PM


Maureen, I understand this completely. I have felt like this myself.
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9 posted 2003-01-27 10:12 PM


Maureen, thank you so much for writing this for me and my Love....you did, didn't you?!?  

Really, it sounds like we both feel. Is it okay if I send it to him?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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