Open Poetry #24 |
Loving You |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loving You I can love you from far away remembering the first time you took my hand and shaped the days to come. I can love you from far away remembering the first time your lips rested upon mine and a warmth spread through to wake the numb. I can love you from far away when darkness sets and memories play and the face of you lights up my dreams when you're not here in the depth of my stay. I can love you from afar when time stands still and we are... as we are. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-27-2003 01:39 PM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it!! Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Charisma... *s M |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Nice....brought back some pleasant memories. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~M~ I like this. Soft and special....though you speak of no pain it is there, buffered by acceptance, but there.....(maybe mine is, and I don't realize it...smiling here...) A good write! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey bklynboy, memories can be sweet can't they... or is it only after we forget the hurt *s M Pat, It was meant to be soft and special with feeling including acceptance...thank you *s hugs M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - nice thoughts from you... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen...."and we are... as we are." If you can love like that, it is a true love. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, I understand this completely. I have felt like this myself. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, thank you so much for writing this for me and my Love....you did, didn't you?!? Really, it sounds like we both feel. Is it okay if I send it to him? "Love makes the world go around" |
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