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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Standing on the 17th I see the stillness of the pond below the reflections of the other bank with its long shadows cast upon the water I hear the birds chirping as they roost for the night Lining up like statues in the barren trees Leaves long good but the mighty remains waiting for renewal Silently cursing the group ahead for their slow play as we chase the bright orange spot in the sky to finish The sun whose shades change from bright orange to wonderful shades of red The sky blue as my eyes changing to deep purples as daylight slow fades and dusk prevails Oh i want to finish my super round and having bragging rights for another week My windshirt keeps me warm as the sky deepens Who's smiling now as I am comfortable but you chill in your fashionable shirt sleeves and shorts I've played here before With the wind at my back I hit a smooth shot on the green for the 13th time today another birdie opportunity another just missing I am happy and content I had fun I was in my zone A nice place to be until next week when I hope to appease the golf gods again A week of reflection A week of 'if I only did this, why did I do that' But no matter what I show up A fool am I? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bklynboy Less roaming and more zoning and you might have made the birdies, enjoyed. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
The putter just wasnt working the way it should have. I was distracted by the beauty of Okeeheelee. And anyways, I was looking for something to write about. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
making golf romantic.......how sweet.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lucky you, in a warmer climate and enjoying some play...*s M |
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