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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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~Veils~ I think of you often, missing the soft moments together when masks are off and only a veil of silence lays between us. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I remember your dance of veils slow enticement as nakedthoughts revealed |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
knowing this well. silences are reflections of truth. and say so much. smiling at this. lovely write nakdthoughts.  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I remember your dance of veils slow enticement as nakedthoughts revealed Concealed, those nakdthoughts holding truth for only you...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
gemma, thank you for your lovely comments  M |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
exactly.. I LOVE this. Its been a while, Lady. I hope you're well. ~~I Love You~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know it sounds cliche, but sometimes silence is golden in the sense that it is more real than any mask or veil that camouflages what might not have ever been there in the first place. Not to say I misunderstood the pain of missing and the feelings that you wrote so well. Hugs Maureen~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 relating well |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The simple verse can say more than the most elaborate... It's fitting here - and works well - Nicely said, M...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Temptress, Hi there..nice to see you. Hope this New Year finds you well. thank you *s hugss M Lori, I know you understand, always hugss Dixie, I'd think you may be my long lost twin, but I have seen your pic... and you are youngerhugss M Nan, thank you again. Some days the only words that come to mind are "simple" ones.*s M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-27-2003 06:31 PM).] |
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