Open Poetry #24 |
Sealed With A Kiss |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sealed With A Kiss I had began writing Where do I go from here With a few lines written Again I pause in fear How much of my heart Should the letter reveal Will it be understood My feelings are real Expressing openly Which way shall I start How will I phrase this Of what fills my heart This poet inside me Takes hold of the pen Writing daily desires Of where and when Exposing my dreams Amongst wishes I write Returning to the letter Adding more insight Loving sentiments Pleasuring the mind Endearments I send What will you find Hopefully you smile While reading all this Enclosing my love Sealed with a kiss Hope ©2003 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hope, This is a beautiful write, enjoyed. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you seymour , your reply is much appreciated , I wrote this yesterday and kept hesitating before posting it Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Hopefully you smile While reading all this Enclosing my love Sealed with a kiss" ========================================= Hope..this is wonderful, and what a lovely closing stanza! Much enjoyed the read today. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, this is beautiful. I enjoyed reading..:heart "Love makes the world go around" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks Nancy ,so pleased you enjoyed yes I had to seal it somehow and what better way than with a kiss Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Ethel for your kind reply , glad you enjoyed Hope |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ah, lovely. So hard to take those chances and say what is in our heart. Enjoyed this, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Writing daily desires Of where and when .... sometimes I wonder when I will run out of things to pen... enjoyed it as always, Hope hugss Maureen |
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XxGrAcIexX New Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 3PA |
WOW, Your Poem is beautiful. |
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