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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-01-27 11:04 AM



Sealed With A Kiss

I had began writing
Where do I go from here
With a few lines written
Again I pause in fear

How much of my heart
Should the letter reveal  
Will it be understood
My feelings are real

Expressing openly
Which way shall I start
How will I phrase this
Of what fills my heart

This poet inside me
Takes hold of the pen
Writing daily desires
Of where and when

Exposing my dreams
Amongst wishes I write
Returning to the letter
Adding more insight

Loving sentiments
Pleasuring the mind
Endearments I send
What will you find

Hopefully you smile
While reading all this
Enclosing my love
Sealed with a kiss


Hope ©2003

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-01-27 11:12 AM


Hope,
This is a beautiful write, enjoyed.

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-01-27 11:18 AM


Thank you seymour , your reply is much appreciated , I wrote this yesterday and kept hesitating before posting it
Hope

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3 posted 2003-01-27 11:23 AM


"Hopefully you smile
While reading all this
Enclosing my love
Sealed with a kiss"
=========================================
Hope..this is wonderful, and what a lovely closing stanza!
Much enjoyed the read today.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-27 11:38 AM


Hope, this is beautiful. I enjoyed reading..:heart

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-01-27 11:42 AM


Hey thanks Nancy ,so pleased you enjoyed  yes I had to seal it somehow and what better way than with a kiss
Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-01-27 11:43 AM


Thanks Ethel for your kind reply , glad you enjoyed
Hope

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-01-27 11:45 AM




Ah, lovely. So hard to take those chances and say what is in our heart.

Enjoyed this, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-01-27 04:15 PM


Writing daily desires
Of where and when
.... sometimes I wonder when I will run out of things to pen...

enjoyed it as always, Hope
hugss
Maureen

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9 posted 2003-01-27 05:13 PM


WOW,
Your Poem is beautiful.

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