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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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0 posted 2003-01-27 10:33 AM


To who ever may care,

I’ve messed up my life more than I understand.
It wasn’t on purpose it’s just got out of hand.

To who ever my care,

I’ve always wished you would be here.
But I never cried when you didn’t appear.

To you if you care,

I still love more than anything.
And still want you more than everything.

To you if you care,

I know you can’t be near.
But I will still hold you dear.

To you if you care………

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

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1 posted 2003-01-27 10:38 AM


well if whoever this is for doesn't care...please know that I do, we all do here...you are among friends and family!
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2 posted 2003-01-27 01:47 PM




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3 posted 2003-01-27 01:59 PM


Yes, Albert, all of us here care, no matter if the one you wrote this about cares or not. I could feel your heart in this poem....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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4 posted 2003-01-28 12:15 PM


Thanks all.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

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