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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-01-27 08:42 AM



On This Day
~ By Sue ~

Loneliness surrounds me
No matter what I do
I feel no contentment
My heart is hurting too

Even though I know it is best
That I went my seperate way
It does not erase the pain
That I am feeling on this day

I had my morals and beliefs
That when you do get married
It should be forever
This guilt is what I have carried

Sometimes I tell myself
It takes two to make it last
But, how do I make it
Be a thing of the past

There are times when the pain
Is more than I can stand
I thought it would be forever
But instead, it came to an end

1-26-03


© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-01-27 09:07 AM


don't feel guilty...it was meant to be...have faith...there's something better down the way
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-01-27 09:14 AM


Sue,
The writing is beautiful the subject matter sad. The future unpredictable but wait and see, what it will add.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2003-01-27 07:57 PM


Sue, dropping by to give you a big hug and I'll stay awhile and hold your hand.

There will be days like this but remember, tomorrow is another day and it will be brighter for you.

Hugs and smiles, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-01-27 08:24 PM


SmartChick - I wish you the best of the best of what is for you in the future...

BC

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