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her silent myth
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her silent myth |
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smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
Her Silent Myth Her Silent Myth Said rarely to be seen Still it nods your head. Her Silent Myth Traveling with no sound Still it finds your ears. Her Silent Myth Lurking in her eyes Still it looks elsewhere. Her Silent Myth Flowing out as she speaks Still it hides intricate ways. Her Silent Myth Maneuvering through her touch Still it runs wild. Her Silent Myth Found in her lips Still it kisses no one Her Silent Myth Closer than ever Still it is as distant as she wants. Her Silent Myth She has always shared Still it is kept to herself. Her Silent Myth Had once found him Still it remains… Her Silent Myth. Please check out my poetry online |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderfully done, enigmatic and intriguing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If only we could read minds, eh?... Nicely penned, smalls...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The silence that we keep is almost like our right of passage and helps to keep us centered. I mean really, I would rather be a myth than an open book. Good writing smalls~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! those same lines over and over again really implant that in the reader's mind...hard to read between those same lines though...had to go back twice to get this |
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smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
Interesting comments...Even for me "Still it remains Her Remains Her Silent Myth." Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me on this piece. smalls Please check out my poetry online |
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