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I've just realized
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I've just realized |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I don't even need to pretend that life is perfect, to the end I was waiting for the sun to rise one day realized I was doing things, the wrong way No one on earth's got a perfect life, and if they do, thats just not right I've just gotta take my dose of pain, not every day is a dance in the rain I am living proof that ghosts exist. Which is an oximoron but I don't care ;) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One more step in the effort of self-realization, my friend... a very good, potent write... thank you! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'I was waiting for the sun to rise one day realized I was doing things, the wrong way' I have SOOOO many days like that...  ! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Liz, this is so very true, sweet friend, I've dealt with pain all my life so far already but am sure much promise is in store for me, besides there is nothing more to lose except my senses! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. Sound a little down my friend. Don't forget that every sun rises in the morning. ThisDiamond |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Don't you just wish everyday was a dance in the rain? - Except for the colds and flu you would get if you did. Loved this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
woo hoo. so, realisation. does that mean you've realised you're missed here, an u should come back? eh? eh? hope so. I've just gotta take my dose of pain, not every day is a dance in the rain aw. i've so missed your thoughts liz. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ... Take time to go out spuddlin' - That's splashin' while it's puddlin' - Go barefoot in the rain... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting, Liz...your screen name suits you well...very good write! [This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-27-2003 04:41 AM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You're wise beyond your years. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Through every cloud there is rain,but after the rain the sun will always shine again. [This message has been edited by carol (01-27-2003 09:51 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I'm sorry I haven't replied to this before now. I must have missed it yesterday. Like I've told you before, friend, you are wise way beyond most people your age. You are very talented in writing poetry, too. I hope you've been writing, even if you haven't been posting here. I've sure missed you, though, when I was on the computer. Take care, my friend.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
That's a beatiful piece. And I love your signature. That's just awesome. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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