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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-01-26 04:26 PM


                 Amongst
the rain                         D
                                 r
                                 o
                                 p
                                 s
F
a
  l
   l.. to the ground
Stood
_______
under.  I know that
when it RAINS the
water will PuDdLe on the ground
underneath
my feet
               as I walk
d
o
w
n the street
                  Amongst
the S   A    T     R    D    rain
      C   T     E    E
that FELL today

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-01-26 07:02 PM


I like the style of the scattered raindrops, very visual.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2003-01-26 07:23 PM


loved the way you scattered the rain
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
3 posted 2003-01-26 07:44 PM


thanks x 2

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2003-01-26 07:59 PM


Pretty topic...interesting presentation.
ThisDiamond

Eromyna
Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
5 posted 2003-01-26 09:22 PM


Hmmm.... I can't tell if I like it. But it's certainly very interesting.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-01-27 09:19 AM


creative, I think!
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