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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-01-26 12:58 PM

Why pluck the fruit for chance of sacred sac
If bone and mortar more than stay the hook
The muse has whisked the mortal from attack
From face that froze the blood without a look
That time began before the tree had rot
And time shall end with every tree ablaze
Why to the course of cutting kindling caught
My muse stands strong upon my sinful days
Though armies draft my veins to course for them
As I the one who holds the trigger tense
Once kissed of bullet saved by muses whim
He does not shift for lack of recompense
If shields shall stay the serpents severed wrath
It’s Faith who cups the fruit to make the path

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2003-01-26 01:03 PM

nice message walt!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-26 01:07 PM

Heeeee'ssss Baaaaccccckkkkk!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-26 04:14 PM

Walt, I love the way you write. I wish you would come around more often and let us see your poetry.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

4 posted 2003-01-26 07:23 PM

The meter of this poem is classic.I think my brother MoonShadow would like it.

paladin

....a knight without armor

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2003-01-26 09:14 PM

Wonderful!!! It's nice to read you here Walt!!

Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

6 posted 2003-01-26 09:19 PM

I'm not sure I got all that. It's probably something I have to read again later, and try to comprehend. But the portions that made sense were really stirring.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-01-27 09:32 AM

"It’s Faith who cups the fruit to make the path"

...Pretty wayout wise words walty...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-01-27 09:35 AM

wayoutwalt
Loved the play of symbols, enjoyed.

elisaseyes
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since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

9 posted 2003-01-28 05:23 PM

Your muse works well Walt

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

10 posted 2003-01-28 07:02 PM

Wayout,
In a very simplistic Freudian overview,I'd have to say the author almost had his "fruit"
shot off! If that's the case, (which I sincerely doubt) that's one big loss for the Vienna Boys' Choir, but hey, he can still sing bass. Thoroughly enjoyed.
Doc

Tari Miriel
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 69
The state of mind

11 posted 2003-01-28 07:50 PM

The real question is
why NOT pluck the fruit
when it matures into
an awesome delicacy such
as this?

I likes...I likes...!

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