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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-01-26 12:37 PM

To attend with all my senses listened high
The inaudible expressions of my skin comply
For the tone of our exchanges ever soft and low
As the thrill of such arranges pulses strong and slow

In your hands the slide and sensitive of silken feel
Something special as reserved a more intensive zeal
Certain slips of icy tips to ski on creamy slopes
Finding every avenue in shivered interlopes

Glisten in upon the chin and nape of endlessly
Lightest lay upon the grin that soon takes over me
For the light of laughter flits behind the shyest fawn
As secured, within the palm, so firmly put upon

My breath is weak and drawn in gasps of eager will
And every fiber stands unreasoned and unstill
Gently dabbled from the shoulder, down the spine
Explications by sensations in your touch to mine

Copyright Kkh 1/25/03

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-26 12:39 PM

I love the words you use in rhyming, the way you set it all up and lay it out is fabulous!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-26 12:42 PM

Kathleen, I know I'm told you before, but Lady, you have certainly got a way with words. Just beautiful.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-01-26 01:50 PM

Soft and lovely!! Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-01-26 01:59 PM

TD--Again you amaze...this is so beautiful and soft and sensual. A delight to read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-01-26 03:26 PM

just beautiful, in rhyme and meaning...loved it

M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-26 07:28 PM

oh how romantic! and sentimental, too, nicely woven together

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2003-01-26 07:36 PM

Romantic, sensual, delicious. I'm keeping this one!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Thisman
Junior Member

since 2003-01-21

Posts 19

8 posted 2003-01-26 07:39 PM

Very nice...the words pulled images like needles pulling thread.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2003-01-29 11:47 PM

Kathleen,

I don't know how I missed this one, since your poetry is among the finest on this board. I love it and look for it. Such a treat, always. And, this quite sensual, yet so beautiful....

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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