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An Inseparable Glance
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An Inseparable Glance |
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the_jazzician Junior Member
since 2003-01-03
Posts 30 |
An Inseparable Glance As a nail on a wall catches a loose jumper's thread, you gently caught my eye when to you I turned my head. An inseparable glance was the thread you had drawn, and despite our lashes blinking, this glance remained untorn. Eternity stopped and stared, distance going - gone! We passed eachother by and let time carry on. And as our glance stretches over my heart's thread you hold, my jumper now diminishing leaves me feeling cold. Alex Constantine Kozobolis Copyright ©2003 Alex Constantine Kozobolis "First remove the plank from your own eye so you can see better to remove the splinter from your brother's eye" - Jesus |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_jazzician - first of yours I've read, nice write... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the imagery of your heart's thread..welcome to Passions and may the thread of your talent embroider the forum  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write, love the imagery here, the glance you described...nice! |
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