Open Poetry #24 |
I Can't Forget |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“I CAN’T FORGET” by Bill Charles ~~~~ One morning I gazed at a rainbow kissing the meadow, and the sky lit brightly with a plethora of colors and then I had thoughts of you, the charm of your face, the silk touch of your hair, and the tenderness of lips soft that have caressed mine so many times I can’t forget.... ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, you truly have a plethora of love and talent, sweet friend, the blood of a fine classic poet rests in you and circulates through your veins like wine, this is bound to make that lucky woman to swoon, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, you paint with the soft hue of emotion charged words - and I love it! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very lovely, Bill. Enjoyed. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful colors painted in the emotions of can't forget. Liked this one too. ThisDiamond |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, Once again you have succeeded in touching my heart. You are a man of recherche passion revealed so perspicuously in word. I always get a lift when reading you. S.G. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very beautiful poem, Bill. |
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Poetic Bard Member
since 2003-01-22
Posts 84Canada, BC |
Wow, this is really good, loved reading. Look forward to reading more of your work. I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Blissful sigh here. Lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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the_jazzician Junior Member
since 2003-01-03
Posts 30 |
this is just beautiful, im not surprised you cant forget !! "First remove the plank from your own eye so you can see better to remove the splinter from your brother's eye" - Jesus |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been doing a lot of sky watching myself, Bill...and you've painted a masterpiece... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so beautiful. I love it.... But, you knew I would, didn't you? "Love makes the world go around" |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
this ~is~ lovely bill, very~! ~Atov |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill...perfectly beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i want to dream of colors and wake up as a rainbow |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--To weave the beauty of nature into your feelings of love...a perfect compliment. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
cute!!! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
unforgettable, some are, yes |
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