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Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-25 05:40 PM

Destiny carries an essence,
As does fate in all of its own traits,
But as for the loves,
The hopes,
The dreams,
Someone,
Has to unlock them,
Someone,
Holds the key to them,
And for them to be released,
Someone,
Must feel the way those,
Loves,
Hopes,
And dreams feel,
As each star twinkles with new purpose,
So shall this,
Someone's,
Love for me,
Though I do not know her,
Or even if she exists,
For no one has told me,
And in the end I hope,
Someone,
Not no one,
Is all that is left for me,
For to share all that I care,
All the love,
And the dreams no one,
Maybe one day,
Maybe,
Someone,
Would be able to share,
To hold it all up high in the air,
And give love unbound,
So now my soul shall be searching,
For that,
Someone,
So loving,
That I might give to this,
Someone,
All the feelings that go unspent,
All the words that go unsaid,
All the dreams that go undreamt,
So,
Till I find this,
Someone,
I shall hold to these things,
As oft as one breaths,
As oft as one bleeds,
So that I might give all that seems,
To be real,
To this,
Someone,
The one,
That I hope to be real,
This,
Someone.

Here is another one, hope there aren't too many mistakes. Enjoy.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-01-25 07:17 PM

That someone is there - for the looking, of course....

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-01-25 08:15 PM

Poetic Bard - the someone you seek is there, keep writing, and keep searching...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-01-25 10:45 PM

maybe just let it be for a while and it will come your way out of the blue

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

4 posted 2003-01-25 10:53 PM

"I shall hold to these things,
As oft as one breaths,
As oft as one bleeds,
So that I might give all that seems,
To be real,
To this,
Someone"

That's poetry to me.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-01-25 11:06 PM

Great write...enjoyed the read.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-25 11:10 PM

Petic Bard,
I enjoyed reading this. It has a lot of emotion in it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

7 posted 2003-01-26 12:46 PM

Wow, heh, thank you all for the encouragement. Though times be tough, and I do not know all of you as well as I'd like, your comments and thoughts are welcomed and appreciated.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-26 04:06 AM

things happen when you least expect them...enjoy yourself in the meantime

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