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zenny
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0 posted 2003-01-25 10:09 AM


Morn'light duels awakening darkness
while destiny sets light to win
Shadows and light beams, trying to impress
attempting to seduce me, attacking from within

Sleepy-eyed light gains early ground
with darkness surrendering, only for now,
for soon the next battlehorns will sound
and that time darkness will be all around

Now light celebrates her vicious victory
by harshly broadcasting a new day
my eyes try to block the wakening spree
'few minutes more please', if i may...

Surrendering, I greet the beams of light
and see you still asleep, it is such an adorable sight
Loving the scene while gazing at you
I realise more then ever...my love for you is true

While caressing and loving, I see you arouse
and give a soft kiss to introduce your new day
Kindled by snuggles, we stay in our pillowed-house,
Allowing our heated bodies to pulse and sway

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2003-01-25 10:23 AM


enjoyed it very much, nice to see someone from Belgium here.  


Charisma


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2 posted 2003-01-25 11:13 AM


Zenny, this is really good. I'm putting it back at the top so it will get more attention...




~Ethel~.....garysgirl

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-01-25 11:23 AM


zenny
A very good write, enjoyed the read.

zenny
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4 posted 2003-01-25 12:08 PM


charisma-thanks for reading; and yes nice to see a 'dutchie' around here too

ethel-thanks for reading, replying and bumping this back to the top

seymour-thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed my write

hugs, Kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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5 posted 2003-01-25 07:08 PM


enjoyed
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