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pagethatwritesme
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-01-25 01:41 AM

tonight, turning to the pages of others.
i went home and read poetry
for what seemed like hours upon end,
trying to forget the softness
of her lips and the belief
that this world could produce
no greater masterpiece then herself.

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

1 posted 2003-01-25 01:52 AM

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

2 posted 2003-01-25 02:32 AM

ahhhhhhhh, aren't those moments wonderful, when she/he is.....all we seem to need~!

*S* nicely done~!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-25 11:28 AM

I like this. Short and sweet.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-01-25 11:30 AM

pagethatwritesme
I've done that, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-01-25 11:30 AM

How beautiful, how softly these words fall from the lips onto the page.

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

6 posted 2003-01-25 12:05 PM

Perfect...

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

7 posted 2003-01-26 08:05 AM

..to the point and oh so schweeeeeeeet!!--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-01-26 08:11 AM

A love...
explained.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-01-26 08:22 AM

A masterpiece lies within the vision of the lover of art...indeed...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-01-26 01:01 PM

very nice write...soft and sensual

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-01-26 02:36 PM

...WOW!!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-01-26 02:44 PM

Thes is a beautiful way of saying it. I hope that she knows she is/was a "Masterpiece Of Art" to you.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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