Open Poetry #24 |
Grace |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-25-2003 04:12 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, this is really good. I like the passion and feeling that you wrote this with. I'm glad that you're going to one of her concerts. Have you ever seen her in person before? Thanks for sharing with us... "Love makes the world go around" |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
WOWZER.....I am ONE impressed person, rock it up shake it up, it's up there~where it belongs~! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Noah - You shake it up and have a wonderful time... What a TREAT!!!... |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
this is great - full of youthful energy... give "everything" to be as you embrace grace. have a wonderful time! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"So let me shake my tambourine!" Very well written...enjoy the concert...cut loose.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You write very well, but not of my age or page. Enjoyed the look see. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - your favorite from what I see... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rock on! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Hi Noah, Great, I wish I could hear the music too! Have a great time. SG |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is nothing like the live music of someone with whom you are in tune, be it Nat King Cole or KISS. The emotions in your poem show that you are certainly pumped up. Enjoy!! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You got the beat Noah! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Stanley Climbfall Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 16 |
Young man, without the shadow of a doubt you have the grace in you and are setting the paradigm for this generation's youth! Shakira is awesome, after all her name means "woman of grace" in Arabic! Have fun! Stanley Climbfall |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like fun...James |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I really liked this piece it rocked. I hope the show is as good as this piece. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
It sound's like you will really enjoy this.This was really good hope you have fun. |
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