Open Poetry #24 |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state ![]() |
This is not a poem on the time of day but on the string of father time to which the earth is so piously attached you could go on living unconcious of that throw the candy wrapper out onto curbs ignore signs of caution...universal blurbs natural forces, time's allies will do the decomposition for you? Oh they will....even as spied through crystal balls 'All in days's time'..said the wicked witch of the west. Little did she know that even if the Kansas girl would get to Emerald City, that too would eventually cease to exist as life we know now would turn into mist... this is not a poem about the time of day or the hour of fervent worship but the finite time on the clock called mother earth, it ticks to tune of multitudes lost..of dearth true, the end will occur in millions of years, you say until the time the sun becomes that red giant and engulfs this blue saphire why should I create unneeded anguish? just my way of being cognisant of what brevity we have the lowly microbe will probably end up the more successful the oceans will eventually warm favoring only that existance and man's stay will be much shorter by comparison I could continue being unconcious of all that that until this jewel becomes another celestial cinder there is so much 'time' you say. don't think I'll have it that way. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-24-2003 09:44 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lots of truth in your poem. I enjoyed reading it, though it was kind of sad to me..........Made me sad for the way we treat Mother Earth...... |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
yes my friend, this is truth. your meaning is clear, invoking celestial feelings. you know this is just inestimable. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
So true, so true. We know not the hour of the end of ti |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay, okay, but you SEE I do understand. ![]() ![]() wonderful, E! [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (01-24-2003 11:21 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yes Serenity, I do see you see that we don't really see that time ![]() we see our clocks and watches
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
GOIDsparklESS thanks for sharing..do well in your freshman year and look in now and then for more of this ![]() [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-24-2003 11:36 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Ethel and we are all so preoccupied with our next appointment and our immediate needs...ahh the sweet life some say!
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