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abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

0 posted 2003-01-24 05:12 PM

A ghost of the moon
Hangs waiflike in a
Soft blue sky
As wisps of transparency
Appear as clouds
For adornment

What brings you here
In my daylight musing
Are you a photo image
Of last night’s glory
Are you real?
Are you imagined?
A mirrored reflection
of something gone?

You make me want
To touch unreality
And claim it as tangible
To dream my day away
Sleeping dreams are
Just too ordinary

trying to catch a visual impression...

(new here, and it took me forever to figure out the right way to post a poem... i finally made it and feel a little giddy right now!)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-01-24 05:21 PM

awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-01-24 06:01 PM

Much enjoyed your first post!
Please check your email for a special greeting.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-01-24 06:28 PM

Love this post!
I think you'll fit right in these here Blue pages. WELCOME IN!
Look forward to seeing more great writes.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-01-24 06:37 PM

Welcome to Passions, Abbe. Try to capture a visual? You did a good job...I'm trying to imagine a moon, waiflike...and at certain times, in certain conditions, with certain fogs....yes....

waiflike...

I would send you a special greeting, but our Enchantress took care of that....so please, just know...

have fun, enjoy, and be ready for a site the likes of which you have never seen before.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-01-24 07:39 PM

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

6 posted 2003-01-24 07:43 PM

I loved it! I can't wait to read more of your pieces.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-24 08:04 PM

(smiles) Yay, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, fantasy is something that can be inconceivably conceivable yet to see is tangible and we can hold fantasy by the palm of our hand! I love this, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Anne, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-24-2003 08:04 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-01-24 08:08 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS
ABBE

I really hope that you enjoy it here. This is
really a nice place to be.
I had a hard time posting a poem the first time, too......
believe me, it will get lots easier. lol.......
I've only been here a few months and I love it. I liked your
first post and am looking forward to seeing more of your poetry....
~Ethel....garysgirl~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-24-2003 10:12 PM).]

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2003-01-24 08:11 PM

'What brings you here
In my daylight musing
Are you a photo image
Of last night’s glory
Are you real?
Are you imagined?
A mirrored reflection
of something gone?'

Very cool. I like the way you write. Welcome to pip.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2003-01-24 08:47 PM

A ghost of the moon
Hangs waiflike in a
Soft blue sky
As wisps of transparency
Appear as clouds
For adornment
==================

wonderful poetic mixing of imagery and surreal vocabulary...well done...
Welcome to Poetry Land...so nice to have you here with us!!

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-01-24 08:47 PM

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-01-24 08:59 PM

abbe
Welcome and enjoyed your write.

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

13 posted 2003-01-25 07:34 AM

oh my goodness!

how nice you all are and how welcome i feel. already at home. thank you so much for your kind words.

anne

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