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zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-01-20 01:09 PM

Natures stomach

Natures stomach growls once more
now an eagle decided to hunt close to the shore
a red alert emerges the silent waterscene
so all preys can hide and hope to not been seen

But the chaos and rhythm betrayes them all
they know soon ones curtains of life will fall
for the eagle prepares his flow on the wind
remorselessly he will not care about this sin

Then a fragment of time he needs for his act
Gracefully he does the job with alot of tact
One life less amongst the preys
only because the law of nature the eagle obeyed

Some moments later, this all is the past
in wildlife these things move on fast
All over again Peace is the queen of the watertide
untill the next eagle comes and again all preys try to hide

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-01-22 09:33 AM

Wow, this is a spectacular presentation, and poem. Really nicely done.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-01-23 12:00 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosah, how could this go so far down without being read, this is a stunning presentation and if we can all be more like the falcons and eagles, I feel we would be majestic in grace understanding! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Zenny, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-23 03:06 AM

what a presentation! beautiful write!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2003-01-24 10:57 AM

Hi Zenny,

Awesomely done, I am a nature fancier myself so this is one for the library forsure, thank you very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

5 posted 2003-01-25 09:11 AM

The four of you thanks for reading and replying

You brought a smile to my face

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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