Open Poetry #24 |
Full Wolf Moon |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
It rises at the fall Winter’s first to the wolves call Cast its pale light on all He sleeps through the day, Barely warm enough to be, Waking to the bay, A brother he can not see On far off snow hill, Calling to gather the pack To combine to kill. White shadows moving in black To sate their hunger On the weak of the herd near, In stealth not anger Failure is the only fear That grips their being; In open tundra they stand Poised to run fleeing Across the moon lit snow land; They sense not the pack. Together surround Tired old bull hold his ground Together brought down First the elders sate Beneath the zenith full moon, Patiently young wait The deep hunger will end soon They tear the carcass And devour the hard won kill Elders watch darkness As the young now eat their fill. Smell the warm blood flow See the steam rise to the sky As the red stains snow, The morning is drawing nigh. Too soon comes a bear They pack holds as long they dare The white predator. The wind howls with snow And the sun barely is seen, He curls in hollow And dreams of days of new green, But these times are white The harsh lean times of the year, Days are like the night And the spring is far not near. Sheets of color sky Ripple in dancing frenzy, Cousin bays nearby Music in a world icy. Gloom This was written for the last full moon, on the 19th of January, which the Native American peoples call the Wolf Moon. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Allowing for poetic rhyme your poem was devine, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ooohhhh, this is great! Enjoyed every line. I like: "In stealth not anger." Captures them well. Thanks for this, It is so well written; and, when I re-read I find more and more I didn't 'see' the first time. Thank you for sharing this with us. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
excellent write proff. *s* I must have had my momma's will |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and it was one of the most beautiful moons I have ever seen, glowing in orange settling behind some gray clouds... nice M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Seymour, Always glad to please you Thank you, Regards2you, High praise to say something is rereadable Thank you, Gentle Spirit, Glad you liked Thank you, Nakdthoughts, Yes it was a lovely moon, just got rather busy And didn’t get to post it promptly. The Next full Moon is the Snow Moon Perhaps I’ll be more timely with it. Gloom |
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