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dhicks03
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0 posted 2003-01-23 11:41 PM



So where lies your love?
Drifting with the illusions of the shadows?


Young hearts don't blend well with old minds
Nor do memories, with present day times
They drown in the tears that surround


From "All is well in hell"
to "So glad you came"
Some say I'm not well
Some say, I'm just the same
Drifting with the illusions...of the shadows


A man who loves forever
Stands little chance with romance
Easier to rope the wind
Than to answer your love
No, I'll refrain just the same
Guess I'll choose to remain
Drifting with the illusions...of the shadows

© 2002 Dennis Hicks

© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2003-01-24 01:10 AM


the illusions can be nice soemtimes,
Until they haunt you.
Nothing beats reality, though reality beats itself. ..got me into weird thought now..

Enjoyed this
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-24 03:36 AM


Dennis...I don't know how you do it! You touch me like this so deeply with poetry you wrote a time ago...I read this and just said "wow" then my mouth dropped open
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