Open Poetry #24 |
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Slinky |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief ![]() |
Smooth move. Sleek, stylish. Silent beauty. Long? Yeah. I guess. Amazing in its ways (and in other ways, kind of creepy). So much strengh and determination (drunken belligerance). - no. Not so much drunken, as clumsy. Sometimes premature to strike (youthful exuberance). Big around? Yeah. I guess. Surely as big as, one could want or really need. Like a work of art, priceless, its not even French. Colors dance, drip down web like patterns. - cream, gray, black, and that devious red tail. [This message has been edited by Effigy (01-23-2003 06:34 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Slinky, I was thinking of the toy slinky, somehow I don't think that is what you mean here???? |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Slinky is the name of my "red tail boa". Its a snake |
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majnu![]()
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i was thinking, the formatting works; and its a nice desc piece, but the bit about your snake adds another dimension. if i might suggest it, i think you should put a pic of your pet at the bottom. -majnu |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
My intent was not for you to know what i was talking about. (Not for positive anyways) What I was talking about is to be honest irrelevant. the only thing that is real, or that matters, is what you think I was talking about. But thanks for the suggestion. Also what do you mean desc peice? [This message has been edited by Effigy (01-23-2003 10:02 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
rofl...how cool, your snake ![]() |
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